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 =  Rhythm
Stefan Bolea
[27.Apr.04 16:58]
Al treilea vers nu are cerintele ritmice ale primelor doua. Accentul ar fi cerut: "ploua parca sacadat", ceea ce este auto-parodic si oarecum modern.
 =  petrini
constantin dan alexandru
[27.Apr.04 17:40]
merci ..am schimbat..suna altfel



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