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 =  place
Pan
[22.Aug.02 19:44]
Cuteaza sa ce? Eu stiu ce-ai vrut sa spui si-mi place dar.. oricum e poema ta.
iar sangele inchegat,
sa curga nu mai cuteaza

hm, deh. Imi place oricum!

PS de ce ai schimbat rima in prima strofa? 1-4, 2-3
 =  parere
Darclee
[23.Aug.02 12:25]
ca tematica imi place ,ai mai multa grija la rima ,e doar o parere



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