Members comments:

 =  interesant
SILVA
[21.Jan.03 15:41]
Interesanta ideea. Ai grija, ca ai pus o virgula aiurea in versul al doilea, dupa "la".
 =  hop si eu
ortega
[21.Jan.03 20:09]
Si in penultima strofa, "puneti" in loc de "pune-ti".
 =  parere
Hera
[21.Jan.03 18:20]
faina povestea calului batran si schiop, tragem invataminte...dar nu era mai bine sa pui la proza, textul?!...:)



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