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 =  "cu iarba in paine..."
maria balan
[11.Aug.05 12:55]
m-ai prins de la inceput cu ideea aceasta de...prelungire in iarba sau de fiinta (cu copite si bot...) cotropita de iarba, prelungire a vegetalului.
si nu doar aceasta idee 'rasare' din poemul tau, frumos lucrat.
 =  coasa coseste calul, fum
carmen mihaela visalon
[13.Aug.05 15:30]
stau departe
in intuneric
un ciob de iarba si-un ciob de iarba
cal ghem de toamna
nor
iarba coseste coasa
nor



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