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MIU CRISTIANA
[30.Jan.04 13:20]
Cred ca fiecaruia i se spune cam acelasi lucru. Pentru tine repet. Nimeni nu contesta ca sentimentele tale sunt sincere, dar nu e suficient sa rezulte o poezie.
Ce hibe are textul tau?
1. e plin de banalitati, nu detine simbol, mister, e pur si simplu o insiruire de vorbe.
2. are probleme mari de ritm, masura
3. foloseste sabloane, rime facile, formulari ieftine "il iubesc la infinit"
4. are caracter de manea



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