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Andrei Trocea
[06.Oct.08 12:49]
imi place modul in care poetizezi firescul si descrierea minutioasa, care insa uneori devine sufocanta.
poemul e prea incarcat, pierzandu-si din putere. aerisindu-l oleaca, il rotunjesti si redai mai usor mesajul.

cu prietenie,
andrei t



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