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 =  idee pentru inceput
Geta Adam
[17.Dec.03 15:07]
Cred ca e prea labartata, repetitia verbului "a vrea" nu aduce nimic bun, fii mai concentrata.

Daca ma folosesc oarecum de cuvintele tale, inceputul il vad cam asa:

de-as fi o urma de umbra
o ceata de gheata



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