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= Sorin
Mihai Balaes
[02.Oct.05 19:06]
Frumoasa inlantuire de metafore, metafore ce coloreaza frumos poezia.
"eu uneori tac
si ascult cum curge lumina
prin sangele tau."-excelent inceput"
deasemenea:
"atunci si numai atunci
din pumnii mei stransi
tacerea iese pe varfuri."-stralucit sfarsitul.
Chiar imi place poezia.

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= Sorin	Mihai Balaes [02.Oct.05 19:06]
Frumoasa inlantuire de metafore, metafore ce coloreaza frumos poezia. "eu uneori tac si ascult cum curge lumina prin sangele tau."-excelent inceput" deasemenea: "atunci si numai atunci din pumnii mei stransi tacerea iese pe varfuri."-stralucit sfarsitul. Chiar imi place poezia.