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Eugen Suman
[11.Mar.04 14:58]
rimele nu suna bine. prima strofa e de un patetism declamativ nu foarte pe gustul meu. dupa aceea poemul continua previzibil si cu "happy-end" fara nimic impresionant, fara nimic iesit din sfera banalului.

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