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Daniel Porumbel
[04.Jun.04 17:38]
Sal!
Poti sa-mi spui cat ti-a luat sa compui poezioara? A doua strofa mi se pare chiar reuusita. Prima e putin prea
"abundenta", cu inger, soare si floare in doar 4 randuri.

Daniel, unu care nu se prea pricepe




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