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 =  erata
Aulus Victor
[10.Aug.05 11:32]
"dezbraca carne" - cacofonie
"s-au topitul la gatul focului" - "sau topitul"/"s-au topit"
Ai grija altadata.
Salutari,

 =  graba strica treaba :)
Marinescu Victor
[10.Aug.05 11:41]
multumesc de observatii. azi m-am dezbracat prea repede de cuvinte. s-au vrut topite, dar...




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