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Primul vers daca il schimbi, s-ar putea sa ai succes!
Daniela Maria Benea
[01.Nov.06 09:16]
Parere umila.
As schimba primul vers din fiecare strofa. Asa cum e, parca e obositor sa citesti, necesita prea multa concentratie...
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