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 =  RRRANGIDANGDAANNNNGGG...si cam atat!
Adriana Popp
[23.Mar.06 16:58]
Tema fumata,locuri comune de nu mai poti sa respiri, ba cu rima, ba fara rima...ritm in orice caz nu are de nici o culoare...
aaa, si inca ceva: daca a "picat"(prima strofa), inseama ca nu a "plecat" de bunavoia lui(ultima strofa)...etc. (in traducere, multe alte confuzii si contradictii)...

SILVA




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