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 =  Please revise...
Hi Mihail,

You have submitted this creation basically twice on the same page.
Also:
1. No need for the title and author, it will appear automatically.
2. Please check the last stanza, there seems to be a syntax problem.

rcm
 =  Deserves more attention
Mihail,

Please, again, Revise and resubmit the revised version.

Reasons:

1. The poem is written twice on the page, please delete the duble

2. Please delete on the poem page, the Title and Author, because these appear anyway in the Header.

3. Please reconsider the "to have no part of the vase" as it doesn't seem to have any contextual meaning. I appreciate creative liberty, however, as editor, I am trying to help you develop your English writing skills.

Looking forward to read your re-submission.

rcm



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