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Chitoveanu Victoria
[11.Apr.06 07:11]
cred ca ar fi fost o poezie reusita fara-sh-chiar de ce folosesti asa ceva?nu ma pricep la modul absolut dar cred ca o ordonare a rimelor , a versurilor ar fi dat o alta imagine textului si unele acorduri trebuiesc revazute.




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