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 =  lumina
Rugescu Ioana Adina
[25.Sep.07 19:15]
Am retinut : "timpul prezent naște într-una
un timp trecut," .
Ca remarca , eu as incerca sa limitez "luminile" uneori multiplicarea aceluiasi cuvant dauneaza poemului in loc sa-l ridice.
Mai trec.




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