| = how to work it out of the workshop? | Ioana-Raluca Raducanu [24.Nov.10 15:49] |
| er, so what's the matter with it? | |
| = opinion | Marius Surleac [24.Nov.10 15:57] |
| well, this doesn't look like a poem. | |
| = Is it true? | Ioana-Raluca Raducanu [26.Nov.10 07:54] |
| :) so what does it look like then? how does a poem look like? Should it be good-looking? Or maybe it should look cute? or funny? or sad? or true? is this a happy poem? What do you think? | |
| = as promised.. | Corina Gina Papouis [24.Dec.10 13:43] |
| I must say, your poetry should rather go under category personal -'Thoughts' as they are rather short and statement like, so there is no room for manoeuvre in the readers mind as he/ she is not 'invited' as such to twist and turn your words (I did my best with the other one posted:p). So, considering the fixed short shape, the message (which is very concise) and the tone which is rather reflective i would suggest changing the category you have posted it under. ...poetry comes to us in many shapes and forms...and everybody uses what they have..:) Regards, Corina | |
| = thank you | Ioana-Raluca Raducanu [21.Jan.11 11:09] |
| Thank you, Corina for your helpfull considerations:) | |