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 =  Romina
Leonard Ancuta
[19.Sep.07 21:59]
ori refaci ultima strofa, ori o elimini. in rest nu e rau. incearca sa ai mai mult curaj in limbaj. autorul poate face orice cu cuvintele sale.
 =  Ancuta
Romina Coman
[20.Sep.07 07:36]
multumesc mult. criticile chiar imi sunt de mare folos.

Cu respect,



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