= shadows in night... | Marius Surleac [03.May.08 08:25] |
very visual this poem Chris! "Shadows are long", "Rustles leaves", "moon filtered" - nice and finally "the birds rest". Good job! | |
= u sure? | Daniela Voicu [03.May.08 10:48] |
u are sure? | |
= thanks | Christopher Thripp [04.May.08 17:43] |
yeh i am very sure dani ...thanks marius and thanks dani .....but are u sure needs to explainded lol. | |
= oh ...sorry | Christopher Thripp [06.May.08 05:32] |
explainded oh my word sorry about that... | |
= wonderful | Mike Aspros [07.May.08 18:29] |
I like the way you illustrate your decision process with the moon, leaves, and birds. Very poetic Chris. Although there is movement in the description of text, I keep rereading it, there is stillness to this poem. well done. cheers! | |
= thank you mike.... | Christopher Thripp [08.May.08 04:03] |
our moon i am the wind complicated but hopefully easy to read .......all is calm now ...thank you mike appreciated indeed... | |
= H | felix nicolau [14.May.08 15:26] |
maybe it's not very new, but it has sensitivity and a welcome simplicity of tone | |
= long wait felix... | Christopher Thripp [14.May.08 17:52] |
well felix i have written 75 poems 2 on recomemended reading ..this is the first you comment on ...so you must have liked this one...I thank you for your comments you are always welcome...thank you | |