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dumitrita paladi
[29.Aug.09 10:57]
versurile m-au prins de la inceput:) sfirsitul e banal, eu as scoate ultimele 2 rinduri... si titlul de asemenea e cliseic...in rest, am zis usurel, simtit si atrage, imaginea aia ca te tinea pe umeri - multi se vor regasi :)
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Dely Cristian Marian
[29.Aug.09 13:24]
am efectuat modificarile sugerate de tine

ma bucura semnul tau si te mai astept
cu prietenie,



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