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 =  editing necessary
Florin, a couple of things:
1. Please do not post the same text multiple times. It is against the site's policies of publication, and it may bring sanctions. Please post only once.
2.The poem itself is good, however, please look at it again, edit the few syntactic discrepancies, and re-post the same poem again after editing, and we'll take it from there.

Looking forward to reading anew.

rcm





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