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= green opinion
Grosu Luiza-Oana
[20.May.05 02:43]
dear sanda, don't be angry with me, but your poem it's too common. it has no mesage, it doesn't say anything to me. it's not even a haiku. what's the bundle between ink, grass and the act of surfing "in" spring's water? I didn't read the poem in Romanian, but i think there was correct "on" water.

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= green opinion	Grosu Luiza-Oana [20.May.05 02:43]
dear sanda, don't be angry with me, but your poem it's too common. it has no mesage, it doesn't say anything to me. it's not even a haiku. what's the bundle between ink, grass and the act of surfing "in" spring's water? I didn't read the poem in Romanian, but i think there was correct "on" water.