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= Imperfect World
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[24.Jun.05 04:55]
I like the essence of your text with its suggestive themes, we all live in this imperfect world, as we see our path goin through the dimness brought about by others especially those ones who brought us down, but we all know that forgiveness has the power to break the barricades of misunderstanding.
= the T
Sigartau Alex
[25.Jul.05 12:24]
read your poem and liked it. it's nice to get a girl's point of view on things.
but i think you forgot a 't' in "I(t) tears me up inside"
, right?
anyway, nice little poem.

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= Imperfect World	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [24.Jun.05 04:55]
I like the essence of your text with its suggestive themes, we all live in this imperfect world, as we see our path goin through the dimness brought about by others especially those ones who brought us down, but we all know that forgiveness has the power to break the barricades of misunderstanding.

= the T	Sigartau Alex [25.Jul.05 12:24]
read your poem and liked it. it's nice to get a girl's point of view on things. but i think you forgot a 't' in "I(t) tears me up inside" , right? anyway, nice little poem.