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= too many repetitions
Diana Todea
[06.Aug.09 08:36]
i think in this case the repetitions are hardly embodying a symbol that can give more lyricism to your poem. it becomes arid and very common. you might try to change some images/words. cheers!

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= too many repetitions	Diana Todea [06.Aug.09 08:36]
i think in this case the repetitions are hardly embodying a symbol that can give more lyricism to your poem. it becomes arid and very common. you might try to change some images/words. cheers!