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Corina Gina Papouis
[07.Sep.09 20:34]
maybe to simplistic, can't see much depth here. could you expand the idea? I sense malice here!:) and also shouldn't truth be true?
cheers,
Corina
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Corina Gina Papouis
[07.Sep.09 20:51]
try and explore the concept of dream: synonyms, composition, what do they taste like:)...I, the reader, want to see inside it with my own eyes. the repetition of 'dream' 3 times is not very pleasant + does not achieve the desired effect.

cheers,
Corina

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= nicoleta	Corina Gina Papouis [07.Sep.09 20:34]
maybe to simplistic, can't see much depth here. could you expand the idea? I sense malice here!:) and also shouldn't truth be true? cheers, Corina

= !	Corina Gina Papouis [07.Sep.09 20:51]
try and explore the concept of dream: synonyms, composition, what do they taste like:)...I, the reader, want to see inside it with my own eyes. the repetition of 'dream' 3 times is not very pleasant + does not achieve the desired effect. cheers, Corina