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= indeed
Corina Gina Papouis
[09.Sep.09 23:00]
love has a panoramic view in this poem: I enjoyed its musicality, is light and refreshing like a cup of Earl Grey on a Sunday afternoon.
The change of 'deep' to 'plunge' sounds better, too.:)
Cheers,
Corina
= yes,
Laura Cherecheº
[10.Sep.09 18:35]
it is pure, eternal love playing freely in the universe.
glad you enjoyed it; hey, the Earl Grey is on me :-)

Cheers!

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= indeed	Corina Gina Papouis [09.Sep.09 23:00]
love has a panoramic view in this poem: I enjoyed its musicality, is light and refreshing like a cup of Earl Grey on a Sunday afternoon. The change of 'deep' to 'plunge' sounds better, too.:) Cheers, Corina

= yes,	Laura Cherecheº [10.Sep.09 18:35]
it is pure, eternal love playing freely in the universe. glad you enjoyed it; hey, the Earl Grey is on me :-) Cheers!