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= Great imagery
Kuldeep Kumar Srivastava
[18.Feb.10 12:16]
Dear MazHul Saheb,

I myself, an insomanic, know what pleasures one get for being addicted to this opium. sir, I really enjoyed both your poems this one and the other too you posted simultaneously. Great imagery. Warm regards

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Veronica Valeanu
[18.Feb.10 17:41]
stay focused on your poem in English, in Romanian the translation is totally wrong and distorted.
this text is poor in quality - those artificial rigid intentions of making the lines rhyme lead to artificiality in the message and everything.

= critique
mazHur
[18.Feb.10 20:07]
@ Veronica Valeanu

thanks...in a way you are right.
I have removed the experimental online computer translation...

rgds

@ Kuldeep Kumar Srivastava

Thank you....
Regardless of the strong critique by the lady, I am glad that you liked
the poem or the idea itself.

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= Great imagery	Kuldeep Kumar Srivastava [18.Feb.10 12:16]
Dear MazHul Saheb, I myself, an insomanic, know what pleasures one get for being addicted to this opium. sir, I really enjoyed both your poems this one and the other too you posted simultaneously. Great imagery. Warm regards

= workshop	Veronica Valeanu [18.Feb.10 17:41]
stay focused on your poem in English, in Romanian the translation is totally wrong and distorted. this text is poor in quality - those artificial rigid intentions of making the lines rhyme lead to artificiality in the message and everything.

= critique	mazHur [18.Feb.10 20:07]
@ Veronica Valeanu thanks...in a way you are right. I have removed the experimental online computer translation... rgds @ Kuldeep Kumar Srivastava Thank you.... Regardless of the strong critique by the lady, I am glad that you liked the poem or the idea itself.