| = on stilts | Motoc Lavinia [22.Feb.10 19:52] |
| Yeah, something I was looking for, has caught me unaware. I liked it: the routine, the day- to- day but everchanging. I am sure you can add on to it, you've got the resources. I seem not to be sure about the line' the dream get in the tram'. Did you mean: 'dreams get in the tram' or ' the dream gets in the tram'? | |
| = Unaware | Cãlin Sãmãrghițan [22.Feb.10 22:37] |
| Glad to hear that. There is ”s”. Sorry and thank you. | |
| = This poem isn't bad at all and I do like the images, but- | John Willy Kopperud [24.Feb.10 11:06] |
| - as to the question of the tram. The right solution in English is: "The dream gets ON the tram." Prepositions are not easy to handle, regardless of the language you use at the moment. Cheers from Willy | |
| = On | Cãlin Sãmãrghițan [24.Feb.10 11:23] |
| Honoured to have such a feed-back. Thanks for help and guidance. | |