| = K | Veronica Valeanu [08.Jun.10 15:41] |
| [ecstatic] it's way too compact in the beginning, let it breathe or start with a thread, not with an exagerately explicit zoom-in /frame. also, i find it a contemplative description of loss of control over happenings, in strong contrast with a much too accurate intention of describing- which seems a paradox [seen]is not quite a fortunate choice of words | |