| = Stupendous | Kuldeep Kumar Srivastava [12.Jul.10 17:14] |
| Today is yours. "I am left with the man that has no story to tell." What a line| Stupendously written poem. Regards KK | |
| = yes & no, kind of | ion a [17.Jul.10 11:11] |
| third verse is pure poison, avoid it like the plague, said the wise man (and a void in my soul that still can't be filled) i think the good one is actually "anxiety became a knife ripping my desire for tomorrow" the last one, hmmmm, no man has a story until you seed it :) | |
| = when tides are low | Corina Gina Papouis [19.Jul.10 15:41] |
| ...love filters everything...me too, in love with the last verse...:) | |