= fair | Veronica Valeanu [28.Dec.10 19:27] |
I particularly liked this part [Spoke fair to me, my tongue] the text ends so abruptly like a resignation I think I can feel loneliness hey but loneliness sometimes is a time for finding your true self which is to be cherished VV | |
+ sound effects | Diana Todea [02.Jan.11 12:47] |
A very nice composition. I give it a star for the sound effects... even though you stand alone in 2011. Have a happy 2011! Cheers, Diana. | |
= Rhytmically consequent | John Willy Kopperud [02.Jan.11 12:58] |
threeliners, a somewhat classical structure without the conventional rhyming. Musical piece, enjoyed it! | |