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 =  little sermon...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[03.Jun.11 19:13]
Nice forwarding of an evangelistic thought. Clarity of thought, but tight bound by the goal of presenting a faith message.
I would suggest "When coins of wisdom glimpse from his chest", as "glimpse" seems in subordination to the "coins" and not the "chest".

rcm

 =  R. C. M.,
Murza Narcis Ioel
[05.Jun.11 16:47]
Thank you for visiting and for your advice,
I accept your suggestion.
Now,even ”Chronicles of Narnia” seem to be a long and wonderful sermon..:) C. S. Lewis remains an inspirational character for me,
It is a pleasure to meet you, hope we will meet someday....if not here, in a renewed ”Narnia” :) God bless you and your work everywhere you are!

Narcis Murza




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