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Corina Gina Papouis
[03.Feb.12 12:16]
Hi Katy, please correct the following:

*the people come to you
**did not disappear
*** if your coughing
****as you are able to breath one more time

Cheers,

Corina
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Corina Gina Papouis
[03.Feb.12 13:50]
The poem has encapsulated rather well the oppression, the feeling of 'stuck in the rut'..I'm sure many readers wonder sometimes how to walk this ridiculous distance between their place and the door while staring behind at the little yet growing kid.

..sorry I had to kill one 'the' from the people (I am a 'the' killer):D

Cheers!

Corina

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= !	Corina Gina Papouis [03.Feb.12 12:16]
Hi Katy, please correct the following: the people come to you did not disappear if your coughing **as you are able to breath one more time Cheers, Corina

= :p	Corina Gina Papouis [03.Feb.12 13:50]
The poem has encapsulated rather well the oppression, the feeling of 'stuck in the rut'..I'm sure many readers wonder sometimes how to walk this ridiculous distance between their place and the door while staring behind at the little yet growing kid. ..sorry I had to kill one 'the' from the people (I am a 'the' killer):D Cheers! Corina