| = hmm | Veronica Vãleanu [25.Jan.13 12:42] |
| Willy, what a powerful beginning! I envy you for that. I tried to do the next puzzle and I think I saw a missing piece. I could be wrong, but anyway I'm going to show it to you: so this is next part: Since then Dionysos and his merry band left the woods outside this city wall. And all muses turned into exceptional women. As the piper calls me once again I do realize they are all devine. now this piece of the puzzle that I saw: [Since Dionysos and his merry band left the woods outside this city wall, all muses have turned into exceptional women. As the piper calls me once again I think I can tell the divine.] or [put back the divine] -anyway, it's a question of perspective... | |
| = & | Veronica Vãleanu [25.Jan.13 16:14] |
| hey a little moment of inspiration to go with: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EocLKUzsaoc don't know if you know French... | |
| + live and let live | Veronica Vãleanu [05.Feb.13 12:42] |
| Willy, it's now that I see the changes you've made! now it's perfect, and the way you rearranged the ending sounds way better than what I had suggested you've put a very profound print on the last part, by preserving that ancient Greek air, where democracy learns how to rise up, never ceasing to forget how grateful it must be forever to the ancient gods. it is a lesson about smth new that learns how to exist without eradicating what is now old this is the very essence of civilization! and why this type of civilization will live forever Willy, it's great. | |
| = Thank you, Veronica! | John Willy Kopperud [11.Feb.13 14:04] |
| For your generous comment to my changes here and especially the words about the end! I was so sorry to hear that you've resigned from the staff. I wish you the very best, which I'll also express on Facebook. Cheers from Willy | |