| = interesting | Corina Gina Papouis [13.Feb.13 12:59] |
| this approach has an interesting way of captivating the reader: it is written in many styles - a journal page that usually you do not come across unless you dig into somebody's drawers with a purpose. I would suggest in the paragraph where you talk about the pain threshold: 'The pain is less powerful now' - I would suggest the word 'intense' | |
| = collage | Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu [13.Feb.13 13:12] |
| Thanks for stopping by Corina. I agree with your suggestion, 'intense' instead of 'powerful'. And I admit that you are right, I gathered this material from different places in my computer. It is like a scrapbook or a collage. | |