| = is there more? | Motoc Lavinia [06.Jun.14 10:38] |
| Now, that to me sounds interesting, catching, yet enigmatic. Is it the beginning of something unhappened? | |
| + very good | Corina Gina Papouis [20.Jun.14 12:59] |
| captivating, mysterious, dark yet fluid and powerful. love the ambiguity created and I would love to read more like this! this part has its own league: "death is not as serious as life. You just swallow a knot in your throat from the corner of the star still left for you." beautiful! | |
| = thanks | Cristina-Monica Moldoveanu [20.Jun.14 18:15] |
| Thanks Lavinia, thanks Corina! My apologies for this belated answer. This prose poem is a whole by itself. | |
| = I certainly enjoyed- | John Willy Kopperud [08.Jul.14 19:30] |
| the imagery of this one. Thanks for sharing! Cheers from Willy | |