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Motoc Lavinia
[15.Feb.17 19:48]
I came here lured in by the title and I've found ' where hands rest in birds', so my journey to your page was all worth it. Here I am now, dissecting through your poem ( if I am allowed, of course).
' I feel like I intangible float through my dream' is far too busy and not Rococo enough. Maybe you meant to make intangible into an adverb?
You've just planted a seed, remember to come back and water it.

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= hello	Motoc Lavinia [15.Feb.17 19:48]
I came here lured in by the title and I've found ' where hands rest in birds', so my journey to your page was all worth it. Here I am now, dissecting through your poem ( if I am allowed, of course). ' I feel like I intangible float through my dream' is far too busy and not Rococo enough. Maybe you meant to make intangible into an adverb? You've just planted a seed, remember to come back and water it.