| = @ | Corina Gina Papouis [20.Dec.17 21:52] |
| Hi Antonia! I wish you could change the following as it doesn't sound right: 'diminishes in the top of the things' it could be 'on top of things' or 'over things' otherwise, a lovely poem! Cheers, Cee | |
| = * | Zavalic Antonia-Luiza [26.Dec.17 23:56] |
| Corina, thank you so much with helping finding a better word for this verse. It is more than welcomed. I already change it, and definitely sounds better. Thank you for the journey you made here among all these pictures sewed in the morning cloth. Antonia | |