| = ... | Romulus Câmpan Maramureșanu [21.Jul.23 17:41] |
| The poem is well written, well felt. I would advise reconsidering the use of the def article for both "eternity" & "times". Neither the poem's balance, nor the concepts' ultimacy require it. Also, a stanza rearranging may benefit the poem's subtle rhyming. Rcm | |