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+ Soulless benches
"in the park, the bench bent by her hips
has no soul anymore.

the air around—
the inner world of a mute."

This inner core of the poem, elevates the entire memento to brilliancy.
The cyanide sweetness of almonds defines the line between pies and sadness, between Juliette and and a love killed by obnoxious family feuds.
It's never about a pie's crust, but about the hidden filling of intentions inside.

rcm

 =  RCM
Zburlea Ariana
[12.May.25 12:45]
Thank you so much for your appreciation, and I am extremely happy that the message of the poem reached you. This poem is very important to me!




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