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= Amazing... The End?
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[25.Sep.05 11:05]
I can describe your text in few words, * so marvelous *

Questioning both facts on how human perceive the end as just a mortal belief, perhaps a human approach towards things, and the existence of God, on how the Great one bounded things for us, especially the unwanted things, those desparing ends.
I reaally liked how you make opinion on how we perceive the ending, neither by means of neccesity nor opinion.

I like your style on how you express your thoughts out of poetry!!

But then, poetry have rules to be followed so you should be correcting some of this!
capitalize the i on the last part, and put an apostrophe on ill...That will make your text more extravagant for me!

Rock on Dude!

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= Amazing... The End?	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [25.Sep.05 11:05]
I can describe your text in few words, * so marvelous * Questioning both facts on how human perceive the end as just a mortal belief, perhaps a human approach towards things, and the existence of God, on how the Great one bounded things for us, especially the unwanted things, those desparing ends. I reaally liked how you make opinion on how we perceive the ending, neither by means of neccesity nor opinion. I like your style on how you express your thoughts out of poetry!! But then, poetry have rules to be followed so you should be correcting some of this! capitalize the i on the last part, and put an apostrophe on ill...That will make your text more extravagant for me! Rock on Dude!