| = Beneath the weightless speculum|
|I like your "oak shoe" and the "crimson pulsar".|
It's interesant how you mix the simple words and what results is a poem full with your poetry presence.
You are in a good area of writting.
My eyes are on you!:)
| = Gracias Dana|
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
|Thanks for your kind words!|
I'm really glad that you liked my poem!
I am truly delighted that you felt my pressence in this one!
perhaps it's my pleasure!