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= The frigid feeling
Joshua Vasquez Butawan
[16.Dec.05 15:33]
I like this one, the plague of winter, the coldness where you're trapped, like a wondering soul, over and so on..
= powerful last line
Edilberto González Trejos
[31.Dec.05 03:53]
The title is also a powerful last line to conclude and solve these nice verses of yours...
I find it remarkable

SONGO
= To Joshua Vasquez Butawan and Edilberto González Trejos
Lie Marian
[12.Jan.06 12:57]
This is one of the few poems that I wrote and after a few days I still like .Thank you for your thoughts.

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= The frigid feeling	Joshua Vasquez Butawan [16.Dec.05 15:33]
I like this one, the plague of winter, the coldness where you're trapped, like a wondering soul, over and so on..

= powerful last line	Edilberto González Trejos [31.Dec.05 03:53]
The title is also a powerful last line to conclude and solve these nice verses of yours... I find it remarkable SONGO

= To Joshua Vasquez Butawan and Edilberto González Trejos	Lie Marian [12.Jan.06 12:57]
This is one of the few poems that I wrote and after a few days I still like .Thank you for your thoughts.