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 =  brilliantly surreal...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[06.Jan.08 16:32]
“I hate the days when I see you smiling because summer isn’t autumn anymore.”
One of the best pieces of surreal, alternative mooded short prose (I’d say), I’ve read recently.
It has something so strongly (and therefore sur) real in it, that it hurts. The absurd is so brilliantly kept caged inside of a hopefully deliberate love vendetta.
Worth reading it.
Being your first work here I would strongly encourage you to come back.
Also let us know a few details about yourself.

Are you sure you wanted to write “craws”? (maybe “crows”?)

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Odãgescu Bogdan
[06.Jan.08 23:49]
isn`t the correct form "monologue"?

 =  both valid...
Romulus Campan Maramuresanu
[07.Jan.08 10:35]
Both forms are used, mostly the French form...

From Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia
A monologue, or monolog, is an extended, uninterrupted speech by one person only. The person may be speaking his or her thoughts aloud or directly addressing other persons, e.g. an audience, a character, or a reader."

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