| = A wonderful poem Sydney!!! | Marius Surleac [07.Feb.08 09:45] |
| You know that sea is a wonderful muse for good poem. So this is the result for a beautiful poem full of sensitive moments and "memories that chat" is a wonderful expression for the agony of thoughts that passes your mind with an infinite speed in this kind of moments. And the paper heart can increase its volume if is touched by water, meaning an increase of the power of feelings. This is a very nice poem that touched my heart - making me to remember memories from the shore of the sea. Gratefulness! | |
| + silver... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [07.Feb.08 18:13] |
| outstanding proof of your sensitive talent, a poem of uniquely crafted dimensions into the one, pierced paper heart... | |
| + Reminds me of... | John Willy Kopperud [07.Feb.08 18:50] |
...that old jazz tune "Paper Moon." One of your deeper poems this, Sydney! Really enjoyed it! Cheers from Willy | |
| = !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! | Hannelore Way [09.Feb.08 17:47] |
| Beautiful... | |
| = Thanks to all! | Sydney Krivenko [07.Feb.08 23:53] |
| Thanks to all! I wish i lived by the sea, that would enhance my inspiration, if I could really build sand castles myself! | |
| + Images & feeling . Sydney | Edilberto González Trejos [28.Feb.08 23:36] |
| The images are strong, you transmit the feeling to us readers... What else could a poet ask for? Cheers SONGO | |
| = beautiful poem | Monica David [01.Mar.08 21:53] |
| Your poem is like a symphony, so romantic and with so much harmony. I love it. | |