| = the, the... | Romulus Campan Maramuresanu [07.Feb.08 18:03] |
| excellent, but too many "the" def. articles... | |
| = Vicleanu Mihaita | Vicleanu Mihaita [09.Feb.08 17:50] |
| thank you..in what concerns the "abundance" of "the"...i thought it would better underline the nouns, for a greater visual impact. | |
| = Them bones | John Willy Kopperud [07.Feb.08 21:35] |
I do think this one is good, but I insist on two things. First: Why start every line with a capital letter. As I see it, this is not linguistic correct and it's monotonous as well. Second: I'm fairly convinced that the proper term is "rose stem" as opposed to "stem of rose." Cheers from Willy | |
| = Vicleanu Mihaita | Vicleanu Mihaita [09.Feb.08 17:49] |
| Thank you for reading Willy.I'll keep in mind the things you said and promise to apply them. :) my kind regards! | |