| = :) | dan marius [05.Mar.08 15:41] |
| if all roofs are full of holes? :) | |
| = Answer! | Marius Surleac [05.Mar.08 15:48] |
| "if all roofs are full of holes" - Between the holes is the best place not to get wet!!! | |
| = Thanks for reading marius | Vicleanu Mihaita [07.Mar.08 14:46] |
| That's a point of view...but are you sure between the holes is enough space not to get you wet?...so ...it's more than a roof full of holes.. | |
| = Figurative... | Marius Surleac [07.Mar.08 14:54] |
| I think that is more than a roof full of holes ... its figurative meaning. What do you think? | |
| = it can be discussed! | Marius Surleac [07.Mar.08 14:56] |
| Time passes by - so, this is "a walk into the moment" like the title says, and maybe the rain will take only a moment; then stopps. | |
| = Interesting content, but in need of some revision | John Willy Kopperud [09.Mar.08 16:44] |
| Good metaphors in the first and the last stanza. Yes, the moment, as such, might be existentially demanding. Please revise these language errors: seeking meaning seeking relief - drop the "for's". Where to stand in rainy weather Cheers from Willy | |
| = Thank you Willy | Vicleanu Mihaita [10.Mar.08 14:00] |
| Your comments are aways more than welcomed! thank you. | |
| = Illusion | Vicleanu Mihaita [12.Mar.08 20:15] |
| a roof full of holes ... its figurative meaning, indeed. It's not even a real rain, it's about "what if"...you can't never walk away from a moment...i appreciate a lot the way you think about poetry. | |