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Marius Surleac
[12.May.08 18:58]
You can improve the text; first try to work to the syntax, then you should give to the poem a more poetic stance, then you should try to keep a main idea of the text...from what I see now, the stanzas are quite different and needs improvement!
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Cornel Costea
[25.May.08 22:10]
Dear Marius,

Thanks for your advice. They will help me to write better in the future.

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= !!!	Marius Surleac [12.May.08 18:58]
You can improve the text; first try to work to the syntax, then you should give to the poem a more poetic stance, then you should try to keep a main idea of the text...from what I see now, the stanzas are quite different and needs improvement!

= Towards Heaven	Cornel Costea [25.May.08 22:10]
Dear Marius, Thanks for your advice. They will help me to write better in the future.