| = perspectives... | Marius Surleac [30.Apr.08 08:55] |
Beautiful Haiku! Again a lot of images but for me, the best haiku was the third one - with the birds flying because of the shot of the gun. Cheers from Marius! | |
| = I lke this, many fine images and good rhytm... | John Willy Kopperud [30.Apr.08 10:59] |
| ...just one detail; the word BLINDS in your first stanzas third line is unneccessary. You can either drop it or use the term "vnetian blinds." Cheers from Willy | |
| = Oops, misspelling - | John Willy Kopperud [01.May.08 09:33] |
- "Venetian blinds" - one letter eluded the keyboard. Cheers from Willy | |
| = Your Haiku | Mike Aspros [01.May.08 22:16] |
| are like little ripples from drops of rain in a still pond. You have a very gentle approach and I appreciate that. I enjoyed reading it, nice work. | |