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Marius Surleac
[09.Jun.08 11:43]
In the sixth stanza I think that you should use "you" instead of "yourself". Anyway, the poem passes through a number of questions for finding self beliefs and a still place within your being.

Sincerely,
Marius

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Muresan Laura
[09.Jun.08 15:36]
changed:)




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